逐段翻译: 段落1: Tomoyo finds himself at his grandmother Umi's beach resort, looking forward to a great summer where he can finally put the past to rest and possibly take his life forward in a better way than the coasting he was doing up until now. 友yo来到祖母海的海滨度假村,期待着一个美好的夏天,他终于可以放下过去,并可能以比迄今为止随波逐流更好的方式推动自己的生活。 调整:“Tomoyo”译为“智代”或“友代”?常见译名“智代”。但这里是男性(himself),可能是“智也”或直接音译“智代”男女皆可,用“智也”或直接写“友代”。查一下游戏名,可能是《Tomoyo's Summer》之类。直接用“智也”。“Umi”译为“海”或“小海”。 “友也来到了祖母小海经营的海滨度假村,期待着一个美好的夏天。他终于可以放下过去,并以比之前随波逐流更好的方式,让生活重新步入正轨。”
段落2:
Of Course there Is Always A Catch...
当然,事情总会有些波折……
段落3: And now it looks like his summer vacation is dashed on the rocks before it begins. 然而现在,他的暑假似乎还没开始就触礁搁浅了。
段落4: The only upside is the many beautiful female staff members working at the resort. 唯一的慰藉,是度假村里众多美丽的女员工。
段落5:
Features
游戏特色
列表: * Multi-Choice and directional story -> * 多选项与导向式剧情 * Multiple pathways and multiple endings -> * 多条分支路线与多重结局 * Good, Bad and Fun endings -> * 完美、遗憾与趣味结局 (Good, Bad, Fun,译为“好、坏、趣味结局”或“圆满、悲剧与趣味结局”,简化为“圆满、遗憾与趣味结局”) * Several different possible romances -> * 多种不同的恋爱路线 * Huge variety of characters and locations -> * 丰富多样的角色与场景
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整合并检查流畅度。 “智也”或“友也”,用“友也”。 “小海”或“海”,用“海”。 “随波逐流”对应coasting,很好。 “触礁搁浅”对应dashed on the rocks,很好。